I took some of your advice and updated my resume. Better or worse?

I posted here recently and got a lot of helpful feedback, so I updated my resume based on some of the suggestions. The first picture is a screenshot of my old post/resume, and the second is my updated resume.
Is the new version better or worse? Anything else I should change?
Also, based on my experience, what roles should I be applying for? I’m currently working on my Network+ and already bought my voucher, with the exam scheduled for December. Any advice is appreciated!